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October 29, 2012
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Be a little more careful with me
I told you how frail I am
I bruise easily, I crumble so fast
I am still so breakable

I wish you'd understand
That I am just awaking
Starting new, all naked and hurt
With no secrets
With no regrets

But you never want to accept
That I am not who I used to be
You just never forget
That I try to let go this grudge
By facing my fears
My greatest fear is you

I can't stay out of your life
Unless you let me go
I can't stop seeing you as enemy
Unless you talk this out with me

I am so tired of playing the game
But I never manage to write my own rules
I just stay in a corner of my deranged mind
And enjoy the abuse of being a tool

Life is so heavy lately
Why do you threaten to make it worse?
Why don't you accept that you are wrong too?
And that you deserve the pain you get
It has to have a reason
And honey, you are the reason yourself
Maybe if you'd agree with the truth
You'd be free and stop hurting those
Those few unrealistic friends

This hate and anger
I know it's killing me
Tearing me up inside
Twisting me inside out

Making me snap
Oh so easily
Can't take it anymore
No more...
A little (but rather long) vent poem....sort of mixing two issues together here.

1. A grudge I am still not able to free myself from

2. Someone accusing me of rude behaviour and insulting an artist, even though I simply stated that I think it lacks creativity and doesn't, in my god damn eyes, the attention it got.

However, it's a shame to see how ignorant people can be, I just hope I won't get kicked out of dA because I looked the wrong way at some submission, or because I blinked.

I sometimes feel like I'm not wanted on this site.
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Dark-Fire-Dragoness Featured By Owner Oct 31, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
i like the theme of this has strong emotion to it. :D (i think i worded that wrong...^^;)
more people need to understand the difference between opinions, and dicky comments...especially when they end up confusing them in real social situations...

you are wanted on this site. :stare: nobody wants those random trolls, though.
Angelis1911 Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
You're wanted dear one.If nobody else seems to want you here,I do.You know how very much you mean to me sweetie.Best thing is block the ones writing and bothering you and move on.Believe me honey,they're not even worth your time.You already know you can come to me with anything and I'll gladly talk with you about it.I will always listen and support you dear one.So leave them be,block them,and move on okay?It will be fine honey,don't worry yourself over it anymore. I'm here for you sweetie.

:iconsweethugplz: :iconhugheartplz: :iconaawplz: :dalove: :) :heart:
DESTRUCTION-BUNNY Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Angelis1911 Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
:aww: Wonderful hug sweetie. :) :D Thank you. Here's some for you too. :iconsweethugplz: :iconaawplz: :iconbighugplza::iconbighugplzb: Have a very good weekend honey and keep resting good for me alright?I hope to hear soon that you're okay again with your head.:heart: Ttys my dear one.
DESTRUCTION-BUNNY Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh, so many hugs!!!
My head is okay, but I'm having a different problem now, bt it's okay :)
Readswaytoomuch Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2012  Student General Artist
Aww :hug: I want you! Er, not in a perverted way, you understand...
And no, you won't be kicked out. At the worst, the artist will hide your comment and block you.
DESTRUCTION-BUNNY Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Such a cute comment! First statement shocked me, but yeah xD
I might, they could report me and nag an administrator to ban me, you know.
Roos-Skywalker Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I know what you feel. :cuddle:
DESTRUCTION-BUNNY Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
You do?
Roos-Skywalker Featured By Owner Oct 31, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Yes in real life. But since you don't really care about me, I won't bore you with my story.

Thereby; the persons that want you off the site are just dickheads without a life. That is why they try to steal yours. ;-)
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