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Dear diary,

She showed me her arm today
Broken down, without a word to say
She lay in my arms and cried
And told me she can't decide
Between death and being alive

I saw all her bloody, raw skin
Rocking back and forth
Her knees pulled to her chin
A wrecked little doll
All dirty and used
Tired of being nothing at all
Enjoy the persisting abuse

I told her it hurts me to see
How she crumbles eventually
How I die right before her eyes
When she slips from my sight

But she just smiled and said
She can't help it
I know she doesn't try to be bad
But she's killing me
Slaughtering me beyond recognition
Like she's completing my failed mission
Of destruction, pain and despair
I know she doesn't...she just can't care

But she holds, she grabbed my heart
She holds it and tears it apart
She cuts my skin and uses my blood
To paint a picture of murderous art

Most naive love I feel for this girl
She humbles me, my thoughts whirl
Confuses me into oblivion
Should I let go? Abandon her?
I love...but the burden weighs a ton

But still, I promised a million times
That without second thought or compromise
I'd be there for her, how could I ignore...
Her sweet calls for help
This burning, damned angel I so adore...

For I want her to be mine
To lay beside me in lonely nights
To play with her in messy sheets
Cuddle her shivering body
The freak, the little oddity
To me the most beautiful thing in the world
Even with bloody slashes
And a smile that insanity curled
I won't, I can't ever let go
Must stay and never show
How much she makes me suffer and bleed
I must cover up and hide my deed
I must shut up about my need

These thoughts of leaving her behind
Must abandon this from my fragile mind
Dedicated to ~EternalFireOfDeath

Please comment and leave me feedback, I really could use some to improve. SERIOUSLY. I APRCIATE COMMENTS WAY OVER FAVES!
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:iconillusionistmiguel:
illusionistmiguel Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Enjoyed this. Really great!
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DESTRUCTION-BUNNY Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you very much ^^ I'm glad to hear you enjoyed the read, also because it's a rather long one ^^
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:iconillusionistmiguel:
illusionistmiguel Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
No, thank you. It's a pleasure to read amazing literature. :)
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DESTRUCTION-BUNNY Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Well then, thanks for the thanks and so on and so forth ^^ Hearing good stuff about my writing motivates me to continue my work.
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illusionistmiguel Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Continue the good work c: who knows who you'll inspire.
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TangerineTerranova Featured By Owner Nov 1, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Your way with words in this is just... WOW!
beautifully executed. :)
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:icondestruction-bunny:
DESTRUCTION-BUNNY Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you very much!
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:icontangerineterranova:
TangerineTerranova Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
you are very welcome :)
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the-stephy-powers Featured By Owner Oct 15, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
:+fav: I love this. Beautifully written and it has a great flow. :)
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DESTRUCTION-BUNNY Featured By Owner Oct 15, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you very much :)
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