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Don't judge me with your innocent words,
Never have I forced you to read my works!
So don't complain about their insane nature,
The pain, the lust, the unbound desire,
It's not my fault that I feel in such ways,
My emotions might sicken you now,
But it's just the way I see most days!
I have to get it out somehow,
Now that I'm at this dangerous point,
Or else my mind might implode,
Shaking, I feel my faith erode,
I never forced you to even be close,
You have all freedom to go,
Just leave me alone,
I ask you kindly,
Once, twice,
Leave.
:icondestruction-bunny:
Um....yeah, the title sucks, I know.
However.......here goes another vent, and I write too many of these, do I? Couldn't be bothered less!
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~dragongirl0000 Dec 20, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
it shrinks! :ohnoes:
fits the theme of running out of patience. ^^
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~DESTRUCTION-BUNNY Dec 20, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Yes, it's alive! :noes:
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~dragongirl0000 Dec 20, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
IT'S ALIVE! :evillaugh:
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~DESTRUCTION-BUNNY Dec 20, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
IT'S ALIIIVVEEE!!!!!! YEEEAAAHHHH!!!!! :headbang:
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Mood: Love ~EternalFireOfDeath Dec 11, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I like the format as it shows the maddening decent of the author as well as the desperation and the rhyme shows desperate longing for something structured and constant for suppor durring all this. Very good :-)
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~DESTRUCTION-BUNNY Dec 11, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks a lot, though it's just supposed to show the shrinking patience and growing frustration, not madness...and I have another poem up already xD
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~EternalFireOfDeath Dec 11, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
XD frustration works too.
Already?!? I'd upload if I wasn't on my tablet
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~DESTRUCTION-BUNNY Dec 11, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Ahaha, yeah!
YEAH! Now read it! xD Welp, that's a shame.
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~EternalFireOfDeath Dec 11, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
XD
Ok ok, will do. Yeah :-(
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~DESTRUCTION-BUNNY Dec 11, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks! :hug:
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