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When all hope is gone,
Look into the mirror,
I dare you to lecture me again,
About the daily horror,

When you're broken,
Beyond repair,
Crawl back to me,
And complain about life,

Do everything,
You forbid me to do,
Become everything,
That isn't really you,

Change and tell me,
I didn't do the right thing,
When I went far away,
And lived my life,

See life through my eyes,
Tell me you don't see lies,
Listen to my story,
Take my right to be distressed,

Your life's been just as bad as mine,
Doesn't mean you're the only one,
Or that your view's the only right,
I just see contradictions everywhere,

And their trace leads back to you,
Hypocrite, I guess I'd call you,
If I wouldn't be as nice,
But don't mistake it as shyness,

I'm just careful because I know,
You can't take very much,
Behind your label of strength,
Hides a tired, broken soul.
Just a little vent I think, enjoy or not, I couldn't care less (which isn't true).
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:iconmintymintamin:
MintyMintamin Dec 26, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
everyone goes through a rough path.
some more than others.
everyone is broken in more ways than one,
some repair it with great care,
others do a quick fix,
leaving gaps and chips that should not be in its place
but still, there are a few,
who leave the cracks in their place,
as a remembrance to what happened in their lives.
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DESTRUCTION-BUNNY Dec 26, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Yep, more or less.
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Dark-Fire-Dragoness Dec 23, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
i love how you talk about people not being the only one to go through something bad - there are so many people at my school who act like their life is horrible, when they're actually quite lucky...
(when i read 'when all hope is gone' i sung it in my head. ^o^)
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:iconmintymintamin:
MintyMintamin Dec 26, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
same. . .
it justs sorta rings out, speak out in its own meaning.
then. . . the rest fall in place, and you hear the orchestra playing.
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:icondestruction-bunny:
DESTRUCTION-BUNNY Dec 24, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
(I actually planned for this to be lyrics, you know!)
Ah yes, same, and so many who then actually make their life bad because they sa yit's bad...and then, when someone actually might have a bad life, they say you should cheer up and not be so emo...
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Dark-Fire-Dragoness Dec 26, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
(they fit as lyrics! :dummy:)
ah...so many hypocrites....isn't life amazing...
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DESTRUCTION-BUNNY Dec 26, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
(Waaahoo! Tell me a badn you think could play this! xD)
Yes, and totally beautiful...
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Dark-Fire-Dragoness Dec 26, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
(uummmm...*complete mind blank*...i don't know :nuu: i imagined it as slipknot, but that's probably because i was just listening to them before i read it.. ^^;)
it is with blood. :D
you can make pretty patterns. ^^
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:icondestruction-bunny:
DESTRUCTION-BUNNY Dec 27, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
(I'd love that idea xD)
Ooooh.....do you think yellow (and I mean yellow, not blonde) hair would suit me?
Yes, I can ^^
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Dark-Fire-Dragoness Dec 28, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
(:dummy: who do you think could do it?)
i..think i am probably one of the worst people to ask about that...^^;
but i think it would look good on you. ^^
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