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Just Hit The GroundAs she lost all hold
And hit the ground
All she saw was never ending
Rays of light
Cast upon the stone

The raindrops fell
And lay upon her skin
A memory broke the spell
As it echoed long
Inside her mind
All she head to realize

~
Chorus:

Was all she ever had inside her head
A broken soul
A broken heart
A sanity that slowly falls apart

Wasn't real

Because the shattered pieces of her past
Were there to feel
To learn and grow
A lesson built
From failure and dismay

~

Shaking hands
Shaking bones
All that ever was
Hasn't been anymore

It's time to fall
Just let go
A fragile promise
And it won't hurt at all
Aren't you sick
Of going on
Just let

A Poem About The Night - For dragongirl0000The truly deep core of night
Free of lies, light and fright
Shadows cast by trees and
We stare at dark blue skies

Fragile minds, snuggled away
Safely in deceiving beds
Hiding from nightmares
That come by day into their heads

They can't deny
They live a lie
By connecting all evil
With this beauty of nightmares

Our refuge, our paradise
Where our dreams come alive
Their eyes shut, ours wide open
We watch the dust dance
Over silent streets

All panic and hysteria
That the dreadful day may cause
A fire of deep and burning passion
Always extinguished by sunlight

Spiteful words they carve in stone
To raise their children in fear
Never shall they

DriftingI need it, just please, help me out, Sir?
My substance, I'm keen to abuse,
A legal drug, I tell ya, cheap, but oh dear!
So insecure and dangerous...should I?
It'd be my secret, as unique as it is,
Damn it, I'll do it, so excuse me, Sir,
Pass me money, I'm really in need!

I get what I want, this way,
Just be who I'm not,
And everything works out

Relieved I feel free, inside I'm going nuts,
But my face doesn't show it,
No one checks for my eyes,
So I stay fine, better hide,
I can't speak, but whatever,
Just take a seat, and rest,
But didn't that girl just look suspiciously?
Was that just real or imagined?
Okay, maybe I underestimated this...

Letters To A Stranger - Five - WatchingDear Stranger,

I now write to you from a hidden place,
I can see yours, but I covered my face,
Don't even try to find out about me,
It'll be bad for you, if you ever see,

Too weak to face the truth alone,
Too afraid to bring your friends,
Stranger I ask you in all honesty,
You'd rather burn, or drown in the sea?

How have you become so scarred?
Bones left broken, skin left charred,
We grew so far apart,
But tell me, where's your heart?

We fight and fight, but forget to breathe,
Furious and full of rage, we burn and seethe,
Stranger can you remember or recall,
What led us to stumble and fall?

I see you wriggle as you read my letter,
I know

Set Me FreeThere is this pressure,
Clenching my chest,
So I cannot sit still,
Pained by unrest,

I twiddle my thumbs,
Not waiting but watching,
My mind feels numb,
And my eyes cannot see,
The world seems to blur,
As this monster breaks free,

With hungry eyes,
It shadows my mood,
No time for whys,
It's crippling and crude,

It's a forsaken part of me,
That I'd rather hide,
But I accepted the plea,
And I will abide,

We'll see where this broken road leads,
My soul is a devastating battlefield,
Growing the more my spirit bleeds,
Hope to decrease it, once I am healed,

The line in between, is so thin,
Insecure trembling,
Crawling over my skin,
My life is

Don't You Give UpFrom time to time you sit in the dark,
Life has lost it's meaning-
Pain sears through every bone,
and your heart feels like stone,

Life is heavy, a game you'll lose,
Avoiding failure, but you can't choose,
Everyone seems to wait for you to die,
There is no friendship, love is a lie,

But you've never given up hope,
I can see you still try to cope,
You're not dead, you're full of life,
It's waiting for you to begin to strive,

Unconsciously you chose happiness,
And you'll achieve it, though life is a mess,
I can tell that you'll keep going,
And I will stop the pain from showing,

Time will pass and things will look up,
Through death and despa

Dear Stranger - One -How does it come, dearest stranger,
That you make me hate you so much?
How does it come, that someone I do not know,
Can make me feel so lost and insecure?

Just tell me to leave you alone,
And I'll leave, to never bother you again,
But on days like this, oh I could swear,
That you're begging me to hate you!

You hide behind an anonymous name,
Behind a fake face, a mask that covers you,
You evolve and improve your tactics,
Your attacks now very from stupid to smart.

And I must admit, I am impressed,
At how well you manipulate us,
All I have to protect myself,
Is knowing how it felt to be the same.

I was once convinced that the method of,
Fi

Struggle - For lolli47Follow your heart,
Is all they advice,
The last words you heard,
Before they burned paradise,

Your personal freedom,
Shattered, to your feet,
You struggle so hard,
But the cuts still bleed,

No matter where you go,
Memories follow you,
Deform your perfect self,
Into a mask of horror,

No way out,
Just slide further in,
Embrace the pain,
Embrace the sin,

Maybe it's you,
And if you change yourself,
They'll love you again,
But I must say,

That you know it's not true,
They don't know a thing,
About what you've been through,
Struggle as much as you want,

But never give up,
As blunt as it seems,
I wish you the best of luck,
I promise you that,

At the Edge of the MirrorSitting at a table for two
Waiting for the other me
To show up
Right beyond me
Too far away to touch

It's like my mask
It talks for me
While I figure them out
It chatters and smiles
And I just watch
Every single move

Sometimes it glances at me
Giving me a sign
We communicate this way
And it works out fine

But then it points out all mistakes
And pressure drowns me out
That's when we are thrown together
And something has taken control

And something won't let us breathe
Something will teach us fear
And I'm on my way to believing
Into the real kind of insanity

Letters To A Stranger - two - DistanceDear Stranger,

I find it thrilling just how I can watch you die,

From a good, safe distance,

I watch as you helplessly squirm from side to side,

Eyes glint with relish as the blood

trickles down your tender face,

You fall to your knees, praying to God,

But he's in his heaven, far from this place,

Your sweet believe,

Won't save you this time,

Don't you miss to freely breathe?

The devils, my grip, is too persistent,

Your thoughts mix with mine,

All tired and fading,

Now that you die, I will be fine.

~ The Nameless

©2012 ~DESTRUCTION-BUNNY

Longing For A Point Of ViewHow could I explain
Just possibly how much I want-
I want to speak
I want to scream
I want to sleep
I want to be free
And I long to soothe your pain
If you look into my eyes
And I mean, really taking them in
You'll see through my disguise
And maybe fall through the skies
Into the ocean
That rests inside of me
I seem timid, shy
I seem aggressive, fierce
I seem consumed by madness, at times
But you feel it in a distant kinda way, right?
Am I right with my assumption
That you don't understand the way I funktion?
I want to kill, see blood
I want to begin a legendary war
I want to hug everyone and everything
I want to end what you're going through
I long to be who I really am
The way that makes you shy away
Suddenly too ashamed to see
How deep the ocean, how stormy the skies
Rest in my disguised eyes

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Went Away

by ~DESTRUCTION-BUNNY, Jan 4, 2013, 1:27:25 PM
Literature / Poetry / Emotional / Free Verse

Let it sleep, let it rest
Leave it alone
Just for a while
It won't smile
So don't waste your time

Go ahead, live your life
Find happiness
And cover your scars
Never forgive and forget
You swore “Never regret”

Too late, it's now
All time has passed
As you went and lived
A life was taken
And it didn't survive
You missed a great big mess

Close your eyes
And protect your ears
So nothing ever reaches you
Now for a while
You can't smile
Since it has left your life

Went Awayby ~DESTRUCTION-BUNNY

Literature / Poetry / Emotional / Free Verse

You're not expecting me to explain the meaning of this, right?

Critique by ~lolli47 Jan 8, 2013, 9:19:09 AM

I think it's a curious way to view a person (or that's what I'm assuming) as an it. It kind of makes it almost seem as if they are nothing. But maybe that's the point. It seems like maybe "it" didn't want help either, with the whole don't try it won't smile thing. I found this to be a curious piece. Quite sad too. I'd suggest maybe going into more depth about it? And how it was feeling? (Hey sorry it's a critique so suggestions are open) overall I liked it.
This has to have 100 characters so that's why I'm typing this random sentence for no reason XD okay bye now!

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~xazziye Jan 4, 2013 Student Filmographer

coool .... Dichterin ^^

~DESTRUCTION-BUNNY Jan 4, 2013 Hobbyist General Artist

Konntest du's lesen? Danke, ja, bin ich wohl xD Ich schreib grad eins über die nacht!

Selina hat schon aufgegeben mit meinen Gedichten schritt zu halten xD

~xazziye Jan 4, 2013 Student Filmographer

LOL ich ha auch mal eins geschrieben hab es aber verlegt .. ja ich kann zwraz icht alle Wörter aber ich hab dann ja so ein buiisle erschließen können ^^ is gut ..

~DESTRUCTION-BUNNY Jan 4, 2013 Hobbyist General Artist

Du solltest mehr schreiben!

~xazziye Jan 5, 2013 Student Filmographer

jip und ehr lesen ^^

~Love-Nico-number1fan Jan 4, 2013 Student General Artist

HNG I LOVE THIS EET SUD AND IT FITS MY OC……. ;A;

~DESTRUCTION-BUNNY Jan 4, 2013 Hobbyist General Artist

WAHT OC?

~Love-Nico-number1fan Jan 4, 2013 Student General Artist

IDK it's name

but her mate/boyfriend just used her and made fun of her cuz she can't have kids or somebody to love her and now se wants to kill herself and she wants her boyfriend to be happy………… and well if I understand it right maybe you'll get it

~DESTRUCTION-BUNNY Jan 4, 2013 Hobbyist General Artist

I get what you're saying-

~Love-Nico-number1fan Jan 4, 2013 Student General Artist

KK…… GOOOD Can I eat your soul? ◉_◉ (( JK NOT REALLY ))

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