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December 23, 2012
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They say just to let the emotions flow,
Is the secret of poetry,
The art within the writing of words,
Of placing the letters, carefully,
Not to be shy of filling the blanks,
Just defining what you know,
To use your feelings,
And to decorate the sheets,
But how can I write,
When all I feel,
Was ripped away,
By a force that I cannot describe?
When my core is a void,
And I cannot avoid,
Feeling nothing at all...
How am I supposed to choose,
The words that used to come,
By night, my quiet saviours,
Now lost within my soul,
Empty eyes,
Roaming the sky,
Searching for...
For this feeling of inspiration,
That I once cursed,
But was blessed with,
Now that it's gone,
I disappear into myself,
No way to get rid of,
All this poison,
That was crammed down my throat,
Breathing hurts,
And without my words,
I'm nothing, just nothing at all,
I am no writer, no poet,
No artist anymore,
I might be able to place the letters,
In the right order,
It might look pretty,
But it lacks the emotion,
That makes writing words an art.
:icondestruction-bunny:
Just a quick little poem, I think...about how I feel right now about my poetry, and I'm in a nasty writer's block, as in, I can still write, but not right, the beginnings are okay but they suck towards the end.
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I like this.
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~DESTRUCTION-BUNNY Jan 22, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks!
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:iconkasekisentoki:
...Ironic, that a poem about writer's block seems to be full of originality and beauty.
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~DESTRUCTION-BUNNY Dec 25, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Yes, I was lucky with this one, but not with any other poems :stare:
What exactly do you like about this one?
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:iconkasekisentoki:
Moo, well you were lucky. So consider that.
How you treat writer's block. :) It's a rather minor thing, and you took it to a whole new level, in "When all I feel/Was ripped away/By a force that I cannot describe?" especially.
Of course, that's is how it feels when you have writer's block, so I like it.
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~DESTRUCTION-BUNNY Dec 26, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh~
Haha, I found getting a hold on the block is my best way to treat it...
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:iconkasekisentoki:
Yup.
I find talking a walk around the block (literally) is the best way...
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~DESTRUCTION-BUNNY Dec 26, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Well, usually I can't get past it that way. Showering works quite well though.
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:iconkasekisentoki:
Hrm, interesting...
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~DESTRUCTION-BUNNY Dec 28, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
So I showered and feel better.
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